Lillie McFerrin hosts a Five Sentence Fiction competition on her blog. This week’s theme is Fabric. This is great. My brother works in the Fashion Industry, mostly with models – not as glamorous as you may think, he tells me. They’re all mad! – so this one is for him.
Here is my entry, which is a bit “far out” for the theme, but trust me:
The needle entered the skin with no accompanying hesitation; she’d clearly done this before. Several previously hidden needle marks would be exposed until she pulled it together and covered them up.
The needle’s precious cargo was the only thing she could rely on now to keep up appearances. Her reputation was hanging by a trembling thread, and she’d nearly lost it.
How embarrasing would it have been to pop a button on a new leather jacket during a photo shoot!
Loved it! I had no idea what she was doing or why.
This took me somewhere else completely before you revealed all – how very clever of you! 🙂
Wow this is kind of deep. I like it Dr. Mike.
Very cool! Definitely enjoyed 🙂
Love the way you had me guessing, and my imagination swirling, in such a short space. Clever piece!!!
One of those FSFs that needs space between sentences to let each false image sink in before the next. Like a comic strip, it needs the gaps to work really.
It worked. Brilliant fsf piece. Well done
Thanks.