Comments on: #FiveSentenceFiction – Fabric “Coming Undone” https://doctormikereddy.com/2013/08/15/fivesentencefiction-fabric-coming-undone/ Dr. Mike Reddy Thu, 22 Aug 2013 03:11:30 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.1.3 By: Doctor Mike Reddy https://doctormikereddy.com/2013/08/15/fivesentencefiction-fabric-coming-undone/#comment-783 Thu, 22 Aug 2013 03:11:30 +0000 http://doctormikereddy.com/?p=757#comment-783 In reply to chaz.

Thanks.

]]> By: chaz https://doctormikereddy.com/2013/08/15/fivesentencefiction-fabric-coming-undone/#comment-779 Wed, 21 Aug 2013 22:28:00 +0000 http://doctormikereddy.com/?p=757#comment-779 It worked. Brilliant fsf piece. Well done

]]> By: Doctor Mike Reddy https://doctormikereddy.com/2013/08/15/fivesentencefiction-fabric-coming-undone/#comment-777 Wed, 21 Aug 2013 04:32:53 +0000 http://doctormikereddy.com/?p=757#comment-777 In reply to Lillie McFerrin.

One of those FSFs that needs space between sentences to let each false image sink in before the next. Like a comic strip, it needs the gaps to work really.

]]> By: Lillie McFerrin https://doctormikereddy.com/2013/08/15/fivesentencefiction-fabric-coming-undone/#comment-776 Tue, 20 Aug 2013 23:33:14 +0000 http://doctormikereddy.com/?p=757#comment-776 Love the way you had me guessing, and my imagination swirling, in such a short space. Clever piece!!!

]]> By: mrsreckless https://doctormikereddy.com/2013/08/15/fivesentencefiction-fabric-coming-undone/#comment-767 Mon, 19 Aug 2013 16:34:06 +0000 http://doctormikereddy.com/?p=757#comment-767 Very cool! Definitely enjoyed 🙂

]]> By: Joe Owens https://doctormikereddy.com/2013/08/15/fivesentencefiction-fabric-coming-undone/#comment-766 Mon, 19 Aug 2013 13:52:30 +0000 http://doctormikereddy.com/?p=757#comment-766 Wow this is kind of deep. I like it Dr. Mike.

]]> By: freyathewriter https://doctormikereddy.com/2013/08/15/fivesentencefiction-fabric-coming-undone/#comment-745 Fri, 16 Aug 2013 15:36:30 +0000 http://doctormikereddy.com/?p=757#comment-745 This took me somewhere else completely before you revealed all – how very clever of you! 🙂

]]> By: Patricia https://doctormikereddy.com/2013/08/15/fivesentencefiction-fabric-coming-undone/#comment-737 Thu, 15 Aug 2013 17:59:46 +0000 http://doctormikereddy.com/?p=757#comment-737 Loved it! I had no idea what she was doing or why.

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