#FiveSentenceFiction – Flowers “On the saying of something or other…” #flashfiction

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Lillie McFerrin hosts a Five Sentence Fiction competition on her blog. This week’s theme is Flowers.

Here is my entry, which is inspired by the picture this week:

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“On the saying of something or other with something that is pretty much already dead but still smells nice for a while at least”
by Dr. Mike Reddy (@doctormikereddy)

“I don’t get it,” he said, rocking back and forth and chewing on his knuckle, “Why is it nice to kill something, then give it to someone?”

He rarely did ‘get it’ but this was knuckle-chewingly bad, so I put down my work things and turned to pay him my full attention.

“Someone spends a lot of time and effort, Oh and water and sun, although the Sun is free I guess, and the plants grow, and then they are killed, yes?” he asked in one hasty breath.

“Well, people like the colours and the smell and the fact that someone took the trouble to bring them a gift,” I explained.

“So, people like the fact that these bright smelly things were killed just for them!” he said sadly, but at least the rocking had stopped for now.

7 thoughts on “#FiveSentenceFiction – Flowers “On the saying of something or other…” #flashfiction”

  1. He would be heart-broken to find out that it’s pretty much the same with most gifts–leather goods, food, even jewelry are a result or byproduct of some form of killing.
    Oh look what you’ve done! Writing that just made me sad.

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